? SAY WHAT?
I don't mean to offend you, but this is worthy ofa good score and some good feedback, but i don't think it's worty of front page (althoug much more worthy than those stupid squares n shapes animations). I think you've realised yourself, but you just need to get better (you don't have this natural talent for making something like oscar has with his first flash and stuff)
It was good, but you just need more practice, and you need to draw smoother!
Good, but could be better for front page